Updates Archive
(much of this is outdated crap, but I don't want to get rid of it)
1/8/04 – I took a big break from writing, so progress has been slow. Veeeery slow. Most of the comments I made previous update still apply, and I have little more to say, except I suck at describing clothes. Wait, I said that already, just in a more complicated form.
By the way, if you actually prefer “yea” over “yeah”, or you just think I should be true to the game, feel free to tell me, but beware that I will quickly form an image in my head of you in a wheelbarrow; me wheeling you into a mental hospital, and it will probably stay with me every time you talk to me from then on.
I have a draft of the very end of E5 (after the Strata fight) written, if anyone wants it on here soon, but I’m really not very happy with it. Damn that stupid thing sticking out over the river at Landorin, and my inability to write it into existence (which is, incidentally, why I haven’t written more of chapter 3 yet).
And now a message for a specific person: Rangi, if you read this, your drawings are awesome. Do some more, they could really help me. >_> Also, props to Kyle, whose influence got me off my ass and writing some more.
Finally, a cookie for anyone other than Fitz (because I kinda told him) who guesses which author inspired the first sentence of chapter 3. Don’t worry, it’s not permanent, I just wanted to put it there for now.
Goal for end of August or next update: Chapter 3 completed.
Realistic Goal completion date: Next year. Or, y’know, September-ish.
24/2/04 – I made this section to keep track of the progress being made, and any comments I have on what I’ve done.
Begun work on chapter 2, I feel it’s going well so far; better than chapter 1. Needs a better chapter name, though (any suggestions?). I might have to refine the plunging system; but I doubt that the attack names will be mentioned much in the future.
I don’t have any huge qualms with how Rhue met Dana and Wes, and I tend to criticise myself really harshly, so I guess that’s a good thing. Note that I’m taking the dialogue from RM2K, not playing through the game, so maybe I should stop trying to describe the environments when I’m not completely sure what they’re like. >_<
Regarding character descriptions, I would appreciate it if someone who can draw well to send Lun coloured fan art depicting some major characters, to base my descriptions on, because sprites are a pain in the ass to work with. What the hell is Wes wearing, anyway? He, Slade, Kloe and Strata will be particularly tough to do.
Next submission will probably be upon completion of chapter 2, or revision of chapter 1, hopefully sometime in March.